preceding이나 following을 뜻할 때 above와 below를 사용하지 말아라.
이유는 조판상의 문제로 다음 페이지로 넘어갈 경우 above나 below가 안 될 수 있기 때문이다.
@ 기본원리: above 대신 previous, preceding, and earlier 를 사용해라.
GOOD: The *preceding* discussion indicates that Carver's frequent shifts in his salad is a symptom of a deep-rooted childhood trauma.
GOOD: We described *earlier* how Carver could find his way in the woods, a skill that he learned as a child.
@ 기본원리: below 대신 following, next, and here를 사용해라.
GOOD: The following code will crash your coworkers' machines without giving you away.
GOOD: We provide the secret password here:
__________ Red fur at sunset makes BB fly
__________ BB greets dawn in roof catapult
@ 기본원리: 가능하다면 단지 preceding 또는 following이라고 하는 대신 분명하게 레퍼런스를 해라.
UGLY: We shall describe Greg's struggle with his grant proposal later.
GOOD: We shall discuss Nicola's trial by fire - otherwise known as her first year of university teaching - *in Section 4.3*.
GOOD: We shall analyze Nicola's desire for a garden later *in this section*.
UGLY: This equation is easier to solve than was the earlier one.
GOOD: The preceding equation is simpler than was Eq. 4.5.
GOOD: Equation 5.3 is similar to the one used to generate the graph in Figure 7.2. |
