| @ 기본원리: in order to 는 fusty and verbose 하다.
대부분의 경우에 to 면 충분하다.
이걸로 충분하지 않다고 생각되는 경우라면 so as to 를 사용하라고 권한다.
UGLY: Use the following equation in order to test whether there exists a linear dependence.
GOOD: To show that this algorithm determines correctly the lexicographic basis in a finite number of steps, you will need to read the entire book.
UGLY: Judy bought Steve new shoes, in order to protect the white linoleum.
GOOD: After Steve had stained the linoleum irretrievably, he wrapped Judy in piles of fragrant rose petals, so as to comport her.
UGLY: Red fought with the neighbors' tomcat, in order to avoid losing his self-esteem.
GOOD: Lyn climbed a tree, to avoid fighting with Max.
SPLENDID: Red climbed the tree after Lyn, so that he could help Lyn to climb down.
# so that 이 so as to 나 to 보다는 더 친절하게 들린다. |
